Grey Angels

WALT: make inferences about what the author isn't telling us
What I have learnt from this presentation is that if the was a war and soldiers were hurt then there is always nurses there to help.

narrative writing

Let’s go,Let’s go,Let’s go “ Yelled” Emma. Hurry up let’s go before we are late. Emma, Kaylani and Shae were all going to Rainbows end In the weekend. Emma is 15 Kaylani is 16 and Shae is 16. They lived in Glen innes and they had to train from Glen innes to Manakau. It was 12:00 and they got into rainbows end at 1:00. It was a very hot day when they got there and then it went a little bit darker so it wasn't that hot after a while. emma and kaylani had the right amount of money for their tickets but shae didn't. They only had $135 but what they needed was $145. They had Emma's and Kaylani's tickets but they needed $10 more dollars. So they tried calling everyone they know so instead they had to wait until Emma’s mum came and picked them up. Then suddenly Emma found something on the floor flying around so she went to go and pick it up and it was $20. So they quickly called Emma’s mum and said that she didn't have to come any more because they found $20. So they used $10 for Shae and then they used the other $10 for the train and to get them something to eat.

Titanium

I was lying on the floor, tucking my head into my chest. My hands over my head and constantly I stood up and walked away.  I walked down the corridor, past the teacher that was on the phone emergently telling the  FBI or surgical people down to find and help me.  I pulled out my beanie from my pocket and then put it on my head.  The police/surgical people are coming “screamed the teacher. So I walked a bit faster as I occasionally walked faster I went outside and picked up a bike. I saw that the teacher had come out and then told an FBI/surgical person that I was picking up the bike. I biked past two ladies that were exercising. I got home and walked past the TV, I stopped and saw that the TV was on 6 news and that it “said Supernatural occurrence at Local school. So I urgently ran to my room and got all of my stuff packed and ready so I could leave. Just as I was going to put the last thing in my bag the FBI/surgical people knocked on my door. So I had to go out the back door. I turned the knob but it wouldn't open and then the FBI/surgical people broke the door and then I didn't have that much time so , instead of me running to the table and getting the keys I had to use my powers. So I got the keys and I rushed straight out the door. I walked and followed the river until it ended.  So I ended up at the end of the river and so I moved on walking through the forest.  It was going to night and I saw a flash light. So I ran and ran and ran. That I got distracted from the people behind me that I bumped into someone in front of me. He pushed me down on to the floor that I tucked my head into my chest  and my hands over my head.  I was scared that I would have gone into jail that my powers were to self defensive. My powers were to defensive that I made some sort of explosion. As soon as I had an explosion all of the  FBI/surgical people fell down.

Learning how to edit

Sam woke up in the morning and his mum had made some delicious breakfast for me. There is a competition at the skate park that is near Sams house. Sam really wanted to go, but his mum said no. He got really angry that he went to his room. He was sad and angry that he opened his window and jumped out on to the grass and then he went to the park .

He saw his friends and said hi. An earthquake had just happened and monsters came out of the ground. Tevita was Shoved into a monster’s mouth and then the monster didn't like the taste of him so then the monster grabbed him out of his mouth and threw him on the floor. I tried to find my mum because she was my superhero that would save me.

Mum said she was not going to help me if I left because i am naughty and  that I didn't listen. So she flew to the moon and then the monsters took over the planet. I had to learn how to become a superhero to fight the monsters, and to protect myself when something bad happens, or if my mum or family is in danger. So I Tried and tried and tried until I got up to being a superhero. As soon as I tried my best to be a superhero, I had switched on and became a superhero. So first I saw some knifes on the floor, so I ran and ran until I reached the knives. So I picked up the knives and stabbed the monsters until they died. Then I flew to the moon and told my mum that I saved the world, and that she could come back to earth.

full stops	Yes
capital letters	Yes
sentences make sense	Yes
used the right tense	Yes
add detail	Definitely

The remarkable reti

WALT:  Find evidence in the text.

My T.O.P.S

T	Title  - Goldilocks and the three bears.
O	Orientation - There was a mummy bear,a daddy bear and a baby bear. The family lived together in a cottage. Every morning mama bear would make porridge and leave it on the table to cool, then they would go for a little walk.Then the bear family had come back from there walk around.
P	Problem - The problem is that when the bear family had come back they noticed that someone was in the house. So they went to the kitchen and saw that baby bear's porridge was finished. Then they went to the sitting room and saw that baby bear's chair was broken, and then they went to the room and saw goldilocks sleeping in baby bear's bed.
S	Solution -  When the bears saw goldilocks the daddy bear growled so loud that goldilocks woke up and then she felt scared so she ran out of the house to her own house and never returned again.

T	Title - Frozen
O	Orientation - Anna,Elsa and olaf were the main characters of the story. Elsa and Anna were playing together until Elsa lost count and stuck Anna.They were playing together at night time.
P	Problem - When they were young Elsa lost control and stuck Anna. Then after a while the parents died in a shipwreck. Then Elsa became the Queen of Arendelle. Then she ran off because she didn’t want to be the queen, she built a castle for her than Anna found her. They were singing until Elsa got mad and struck Anna again but in the heart. It was a bad place to be struck because if she got struck in the heart which she did, then you could turn into solid ice. When elsa left Arendelle she turned  Arendelle into winter, which people didn't like.
S	Solution - Elsa came back because Anna was turning into solid ice. Elsa was about to die because Hans was going to stab her until Anna blocked her and then turned into solid Ice. The only thing to break the spell was a sisters Hug. So then Elsa hugged Anna and then Anna’s arms started defrosting. Then when Anna defrosted Anna said something and then Elsa said it then she turned winter into summer and then they lived happily  ever after.

Current event hats

Here is a link for Kiwi kids news. Click.
I am learning to use the 6 hats to think about and summarise a current event.

Clowning around

If you ever want to get a job you should apply to work at the auckland kids starship. It would be cool, because you get to dress up into clowns and you get to make kids laugh. It would be super extremely fun.

If you ever got to the point of being a clown doctor in your own time then you would probably have a good time making children laugh and be happy. It would be great if you could make kids happy, because then they would be happy and joyful and not disturb you if you have work. Clown doctors are doctors that work in starship hospitals for children. They dress up into a clown and then they have to make kids happy for the rest of the day.

The rules

We are learning to make inferences about what the author isn't telling us. 

The leather satchel

WALT: make inferences about what the author isn't telling us




In this story there are two sisters that are desperate to getting a job. They are really mad that they couldn't get a job until the end of the story.