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Let’s go,Let’s go,Let’s go “ Yelled” Emma. Hurry up let’s go before we are late. Emma, Kaylani and Shae were all going to Rainbows end In the weekend. Emma is 15 Kaylani is 16 and Shae is 16. They lived in Glen innes and they had to train from Glen innes to Manakau. It was 12:00 and they got into rainbows end at 1:00. It was a very hot day when they got there and then it went a little bit darker so it wasn't that hot after a while. emma and kaylani had the right amount of money for their tickets but shae didn't. They only had $135 but what they needed was $145. They had Emma's and Kaylani's tickets but they needed $10 more dollars. So they tried calling everyone they know so instead they had to wait until Emma’s mum came and picked them up. Then suddenly Emma found something on the floor flying around so she went to go and pick it up and it was $20. So they quickly called Emma’s mum and said that she didn't have to come any more because they found $20. So they used $10 for Shae and then they used the other $10 for the train and to get them something to eat.