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This term team 4 has been learning about Pt England schools new topic,our topic is called trade and enterprise. Trade means when you have something and you trade it for something else, and enterprising is when you make something and you sell it. Team 4 is having there own trade and enterprise groups in their space and is making and selling things like.
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Trade means when you have something and you trade it for something else, and enterprising is when you make something and you sell it. Team 4 is having there own trade and enterprise groups in their space and is making and selling things like. Have you ever been in a trade and enterprise group?
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You should try trade and enterprise because you could buy,sell and collect things! Trade means when you have something and you trade it for something else, and enterprising is when you make something and you sell it. Team 4 is having there own trade and enterprise groups in their space and is making and selling things.
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Trade means when you have something and you trade it for something else, and enterprising is when you make something and you sell it. Team 4 is having there own trade and enterprise groups in their space and is making and selling things. For the past 4 weeks team 4 has been making products to sell and make PT’s and pieces, and during class we earn PT's and pieces well we are working.
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