WALT add detail to the beginning of sentences.
Make these sentences into complex sentences by adding another clause to the beginning.
In a dairy factory the milk gets spinned around on the spinning machine, then the milk and cream are separated. When the milk and cream are separated in the blue bottle the farmers put more cream and in the green bottle they only put a little. When the bottles are filled of milk and a little bit of cream then they are sent to dairies.
In a dairy factory the milk gets spinned around on the spinning machine, then the Milk and cream are separated. The machine is set up to 72 degrees Celsius so that all the germs wipe out of the milk. If the milk doesn't go into the machine then the baby that drink it could get really sick.
Finally the milk is bottled, ready for you to drink. That completes the journey from grass to glass.
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