Week 6 word knowledge

WALT: use words to make sentences and different

Cross country Poem

Cross Country

  Filthy,Difficult, Muddy Puffing,Exhausted,terrified

Extremeness

Grass to glass part 2

WALT add detail to the beginning of sentences.

Make these sentences into complex sentences by adding another clause to the beginning.

As soon as the warm milk is brought out of the cows,  the milk gets put in the fridge so that the milk can get cooled. When the milk is cooled then they go into a machine. The milk goes into the machine so the germs can go away.

In a dairy factory the milk gets spinned around on the spinning machine, then the milk and cream are separated. When the milk and cream are separated in the blue bottle the farmers put more cream and in the green bottle they only put a little. When the bottles are filled of milk and a little bit of cream then they are sent to dairies.

In a dairy factory the milk gets spinned around on the spinning machine, then the Milk and cream are separated. The machine is set up to 72 degrees Celsius so that all the germs wipe out of the milk. If the milk doesn't go into the machine then the baby that drink it could get really sick.

Finally the milk is bottled, ready for you to drink. That completes the journey from grass to glass.

Aliyah Hooking in

WALT: Writing introductions that orientate and hook in our audience.












First try: 
This term team 4 has been learning about Pt England schools new topic,our topic is called trade and enterprise. Trade means when you have something and you trade it for something else, and enterprising is when you make something and you sell it. Team 4 is having there own trade and enterprise groups in their space and is making and selling things like.

With a ?
Trade means when you have something and you trade it for something else, and enterprising is when you make something and you sell it. Team 4 is having there own trade and enterprise groups in their space and is making and selling things like. Have you ever been in a trade and enterprise group?

With a !

You should try trade and enterprise because you could buy,sell and collect things! Trade means when you have something and you trade it for something else, and enterprising is when you make something and you sell it. Team 4 is having there own trade and enterprise groups in their space and is making and selling things.

With facts.

Trade means when you have something and you trade it for something else, and enterprising is when you make something and you sell it. Team 4 is having there own trade and enterprise groups in their space and is making and selling things. For the past 4 weeks team 4 has been making products to sell and make PT’s and pieces, and during class we earn PT's and pieces well we are working.

Living on a farm

If I grew up or lived on a farm I would love to milk the cows because I would love to make the milk and drink it to. Whenever lived on a farm I would always be responsible at milking the cows and making it.The reason I would like to be milking the cows is because I would be able to mix milk powder and water together and make milk, and when I finish making it I pour it into the milk container so that the cows can drink it.

My second favourite thing that I would like to do would be giving the cows medicine. If I got to give the cows medicine I would always be there to do that every single day. The reason I would secondly like to give cows medicine is because I wouldn't like the cows to get sores and sick. I really like cows that have nice coloured delightful skin.

My last favourite thing that I would like to do would be riding a horse. I would lastly like to ride a horse because if I got to ride on a horse I would ride through the paddock and on the field. The reason I would like to ride a horse is because it would be fun and a lot of work to push the calves or cows  into the pen.

It has been interesting to learn about what it would be like to live on a dairy farm, all the jobs you get to help with and animals you care for. But living there full time? No thank you. I think I’ll stick to the city, where I live and belong.

My family

WALT: use similes to write a poem about my family

My family

My mum is like a snowflake     

She is sparkly and she is special and unique. 

My baby brother is like a motor bike engine.

He always shouts and he is always a chatterbox.

My sister is like a creative expert.

She is always trying to create things and try to be a scientist.

All about me

WALT: use similes to write a poem about ourselves.

The blindfold game

‘ GUESS WHAT’ My literacy class and I played a really cool game called the blindfold game. We played this game around 9:30-10:00. The date and the day we played the blindfold game was on 02/06/15, and the day that we played on was Wednesday the second of June 2015.

When the game was going to start miss lavakula called out six people to come and sit on the mat next to the bowl of rice and safety pins in it and be blindfolded to get the game started. The first six people to be blindfolded were “Andrew, Jonathon,Machelle,Tavake,Montel and Alex. The next six people that went up was “ Adrian,Kosini,Aysha,Shenna,Jennifer and Tom.

For the third group of people that went up and played was Revival,Glennis,Wesley,Mystique,Me and Lotu. For the fourth game the people that were playing was Germaine,Isaac,Martin,Daniella,Emmanuel and Dezarae. The fifth game was Flynlay,Amethyst,Siokita,Sabrina and Angelica. But for the last game it was two teachers that are named Miss Williamson and Miss Lavakula. The people that Got the most safety pins are Flynlay and Andrew”.

My literacy class and I played the blindfold game because Miss lavakula said that when we finished playing this game we are all going to write 5 paragraphs of what happened in the game when did it happen, why did we play it, what was it, and how did  we play it. We wrote paragraphs because when we finish writing it we post it on our blog so people around the world can see what we played and what we done and so that they could have a turn at playing it.

My favourite part of this blindfold game is that you get to have fun with your friends and family and you can play with a lot of things like coco pops,rice bubbles,rice,cornflakes and all of the other things you can think of. The thing that we played with that went in the bowl was 20 safety pins and rice.

Ladybird Ladybird Quiz

WALT: read and understand new words.

similies

WALT:  Write simple and complex sentences using figure if speech.

Robot war

This play is about the robot war. The main thing about this play are the characters. The characters names are mum

, Tina,Carl,Robbie and QT174. In the community centre there was a Fun sports programme going on. Mum asked if Tina and Carl wanted to go but they said we are all right. 

Helping to win war

WALT: Read and understand new words

Robot Wars Reflection

WALT: reflect on our reading and presenting skills.

I feel that...	Yes	Not Sure	No
My voice was loud and clear, so the audience were able to hear me.	Aliyah
I was able to read my parts of the play fluently.			Aliyah
I was facing the audience at all times, and didn’t have my back to them.			Aliyah
I can retell the play in my own words.		Aliyah

What do you think you did well during the play?

Read through my parts.

What is something that you could improve?  Facing the crowd

My personification

WALT: give objects living characteristics

The chocolate game

“Guess” what did you know that my literacy class and I played a really cool game called The chocolate game.

The whole point of the game is that you have to have a block of chocolate on a plate with a knife and a fork. Then there has to be seven accessories like a tiara and glasses and all kind of accessories you can wear. Then you will have to put to clothings around the plate, and take all of the clothing and accessories of.

After you have put the clothing, accessories and your chocolate on the plate with a knife and fork you have to have people that are in a circle. Then you have to get a dice.If you get a six then you will have to put accessories and clothing on and then you will have to quickly cut and eat the chocolate.

When It was my turn to roll the dice,I was scared because I didn't want to get up and get dressed into accessories and clothing in front of everyone. When the dice rolled, I was hoping that it would not land on a 6. So I rolled the dice and saw that the number was a four. After it landed on a four the dice went to a different person so that they can roll it.

I really enjoyed watching people get dressed up into things like funny accessories. The part I didn't enjoy about this chocolate game is when I have to get up and get dressed up into funny accessories and clothing.

in a hundred years time

WALT: Predict what life might be like in a hundred years time

 This is a toy from the future that you can stand on and fly on

In this photo there is a toy from the future. his toy is a thing that you stand on and it flies. this toy is one of the things I would really want to play on and use to go to school on. I really wan this toy.

Nepal Earthquake

In Nepal there was a 7.8 earthquake and people were afraid to go outside.The devastating disaster made everyone panic people were scared because the ground was  very shaky. It was scary. As the earthquake was happening , the ground was starting to crack. More than 5000 people died from the destruction It was really dangerous that no one could stand up in one place.

      

When the earthquake happened people were gathering in the middle of the streets. If they stayed where they wanted , the buildings could have fall on them and possibly killed them.  After the horrible disaster happened everything was destroyed and damaged. things like furniture,sculptures,cars, building and people. Almost all of the buildings were demolished.

People were crying because some of their siblings had died and they had no one, or nothing left it was all gone. When the disaster finished people tried to get as much food and water they could to eat and drink to survive and have one more chance to live.

The special ride

WALT: Identify which sentence best shows the picture

In my picture it is a bike going down a one lane bike track.

Have you ever been on a flying fox. If you don't know what it is then this is what it is.A flying fox is something that could go on a really strong wire and that has a pulley on it that you can hold onto or sit on. A flying fox is really cool and fun because it feels like you are flying.

Ladybird Ladybird quiz

WALT: read and understand new words.